In the
gloomy, remote forest, the glistening, ghostly galleon was tossed upon the
cloudy seas. Spooky and still, the creepy forest was deadly silent. As tall as
a crane, trees towered over scattered leaves whilst small animals, mice or
voles, rustled across the forest, trying to find food. The mysterious forest
just got more frightening, as the white light from the moon got brighter and
brighter and brighter. Soon, half of the forest was full of light and the
other, petrifying, half was full of darkness. The eerie forest just got more
terrifying!
I like yor use of adjectrives and suspense. Try to avoid repeating yourself.
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