Tranquil, the dormant volcano
was like a sleeping kitten,
Resting for years,
A peaceful valley fading into
the distance.
Awakening, the volcano
groaned, shaking the land,
For now it is hungry, grumpy,
Plotting to destroy all in
its path.
Screeching with anger, the
vicious monster’s mouth was ajar, spitting out its exploding lava,
Bursting like a firework, the
violent volcano punished the villagers,
Devouring the land.
Now tranquil, the volcano
becomes dormant again,
Resting for decades to come,
Peacefully fading into the
distance.
By Samiya
I like yopur vocabulary and choice of words. I also liked your ending. However, can you keep the length of your lines consistent please?
ReplyDeletei think this is a wonderful peace of work you used alot of powerful vocabulary i think you should use more connectives
ReplyDeleteI like your choice of words and you've used lots of complexed sentances. Well done!!!!!!!!!!
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