Tuesday, 5 March 2013

Samiya 5/3/13


The Volcano

 

Tranquil, the dormant volcano was like a sleeping kitten,

Resting for years,

A peaceful valley fading into the distance.

 

Awakening, the volcano groaned, shaking the land,

For now it is hungry, grumpy,

Plotting to destroy all in its path.

 

Screeching with anger, the vicious monster’s mouth was ajar, spitting out its exploding lava,

Bursting like a firework, the violent volcano punished the villagers,

Devouring the land.

 

Now tranquil, the volcano becomes dormant again,

Resting for decades to come,

Peacefully fading into the distance.

 

By Samiya

3 comments:

  1. I like yopur vocabulary and choice of words. I also liked your ending. However, can you keep the length of your lines consistent please?

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  2. i think this is a wonderful peace of work you used alot of powerful vocabulary i think you should use more connectives

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  3. I like your choice of words and you've used lots of complexed sentances. Well done!!!!!!!!!!

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