Woods in the Moonlight
Still and calm, the moon illuminated the pitch black sky, creating life
in the woods. The leaves rustled beneath the trees, trying to hug the trunks,
while branches high-fived each other, making a cheerful sound. Going round and round
like a merry-gold round, the trees were getting spun by the wind. As the
brightening sun rose and the moon died down, the woods became dead still and
a sound wasn’t to be heard.
well done.You have used good complex sentences and sentences to create effect
ReplyDeletewell done you have used a range of complex senteces
ReplyDeleteBrilliant work Amaan! You've used a range of good comlex sentences that creates good effects.
ReplyDelete* To get more affect make short sentences tto creat effect