Raging Sea
Deep beneath the dark blue
sea
The angry king wakes slowly,
slowly, slowly!
Tossing and turning his salty
hair he awakes
He calls his precious army to
prepare a war
He begins to below like a
hungry lion
Stampeding white horses start
to arrive
The king begins to rage in
distress
Demands sending out the army
to concur the land
The sea is like a hungry bull
jumping, teaping and charging
Sea gobble up rocks with
their canvas mouths spitting them out
The waves terrorise the land
splish, splash, splosh
He is a vicious king of the
sea
Aggressively the king snaps
his sword
Rocks shivering in fear and
stands
Boom, crash!
By Bilal Valli
Bilal,your similes are very good
ReplyDeleteExcellent use of power of 3 EG: slowy,slowy,slowly.
ReplyDeleteBilal, Your vocabulary was excellent and i liked how u use the power of e E.G slowly,slowly,slowly.
ReplyDeletegood work Bilal,you have written a well and really intresting poem your vocabulary was brilliant and i enjoyed reading your poem
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