Moody Seas
The sea is like a sleepy
teenager,
Wrapping itself in a cosy bed of sand,
Giggling as it laps the silky
shore,
Calm and quiet as a blue summer sky.
The sea is like a raging
teenager,
Bashing, smashing and twisting,
In anger becoming a ferocious, furious
dragon,
Demolishing everything in its path.
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.you used alot of powerfull adjectives
ReplyDelete.you used good similies
*if you didnt use the word tenagers that much it would've been much better