The woods in the
Moonlight
In the middle of the night ,the glistened forest was illuminated
by the moonlight while old leaves were
completely still on slender trees. Even though the branches twitch, they never
move as if they are waiting for something .In the eerie silence, occasionally a
rodent races through the foggy forest in search of the only food on the land.
Ever tree was waiting and waiting.
Vikram, i like your high leveled work.
ReplyDelete*The good use of powerful vocabulary.
*Correct punctuation.
*I wish you had used some words correctly.
*You have used vocabulary like illuminated
ReplyDelete*You have used descriptive language
You could improve on better sentence openning
This is a very good piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteYou have used very good vocabulary and I liked your last sentence because it created effect.
I wish you had used some more different openers.
well done Vikram.
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